Renegades of Pern - Chapter Ten

[kalinara]

So last time, I got to bitch about the fact that apparently fifty-one pages of story, THIS story, exists only in the form of a separate short story.

And I mean, fine. I'll let it go. The problem is, without this story, Aramina is nothing but a McGuffin who makes demands. And Thella, by default, is the closest thing we have to a main character.

And we haven't seen her in like four chapters.

But look on the bright side, because this chapter gives us McCaffrey utterly fucking her timeline dry.

( And it gets worse... )