2024-02-26

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[personal profile] kalinara2024-02-26 05:56 pm

Renegades of Pern - Chapter Ten

So last time, I got to bitch about the fact that apparently fifty-one pages of story, THIS story, exists only in the form of a separate short story.

And I mean, fine. I'll let it go. The problem is, without this story, Aramina is nothing but a McGuffin who makes demands. And Thella, by default, is the closest thing we have to a main character.

And we haven't seen her in like four chapters.

But look on the bright side, because this chapter gives us McCaffrey utterly fucking her timeline dry.

And it gets worse... )