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Renegades of Pern - Chapter Ten
So last time, I got to bitch about the fact that apparently fifty-one pages of story, THIS story, exists only in the form of a separate short story.
And I mean, fine. I'll let it go. The problem is, without this story, Aramina is nothing but a McGuffin who makes demands. And Thella, by default, is the closest thing we have to a main character.
And we haven't seen her in like four chapters.
But look on the bright side, because this chapter gives us McCaffrey utterly fucking her timeline dry.
( And it gets worse... )
And I mean, fine. I'll let it go. The problem is, without this story, Aramina is nothing but a McGuffin who makes demands. And Thella, by default, is the closest thing we have to a main character.
And we haven't seen her in like four chapters.
But look on the bright side, because this chapter gives us McCaffrey utterly fucking her timeline dry.
( And it gets worse... )