Fugitive Prince - Verdict
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Okay, so. I've finished another part of the very long "Wars of Light and Shadow" series. And well, it's probably of no surprise that I give it a passing grade. I love this series unironically. It's both fun and fun to mock.
The last book is coming out this May by the way. I am quite excited.
So let's talk about it. We'll start with Plot.
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The thing to understand about this series is that it's made up of arcs. These arcs are all of different lengths, because Ms. Wurts is sometimes confusing that way.
Curse of the Mistwraith is essentially its own arc, standalone. It's where everything starts. We have Lysaer as an actual person, pre curse. We have Arithon when he was young and only moderately angsty. No one's been crowned and no one's been cursed. It's an innocent time.
Ships of Merior and Warhost of Vastmark is the second arc. They were originally meant to be one book (and are, in hardcover. I still regret not buying it from the used book store. It was big enough to kill a rodent). This is where we have Lysaer the statesman and general pursuing Arithon the pirate and guerilla leader. A lot of back and forth moves and schemes, and character flaws brought home to roost.
By this point in the series, Ms. Wurts knew that this next arc (the Alliance of Light) wasn't going to fit into one book. Apparently, she'd planned two or three. It ended up being five books long. (The series is interestingly palindromic, though. As the following series, Sword of the Canon, is two books. And the last book, Song of the Mysteries, is once more on its own.)
I mention this because, more than anything, Fugitive Prince is really set up. There's movement and direction, but not much by way of climax or resolution. That's going to be a while.
That said, I do think she found a reasonably satisfying point to end things for now. The clans are still in peril and slavery is still a pretty big issue, but they've got some hope for sanctuary and the means of getting there. I particularly liked that the triumph came, not from our heroes, but from the minor characters: Caolle primarily, but also Maenol, Mearn, Eldir and those nameless clan prisoners all were the real reason things turned around.
When it comes to Arithon and Lysaer, well, neither of them had a particularly great time. But Arithon does get something of an emotional resolution with Jieret, and Lysaer, for all his setbacks, comes out of it with a new loyal follower and eventual right hand man. I hadn't thought about it until now, but that's a really interesting parallel. It'll be worth looking at that again, especially if I end up recapping book 6 (Peril's Gate).
Just for perspective, we're on book 4 right now.
I also liked that this book gave us a glimpse at some of the darker aspects of the story that until then had only been discussed. The part of the story where Arithon actually succumbs to the curse is really effective. It really does make us appreciate exactly what he's been trying to fight all these years, while also maybe giving Lysaer a bit of something back too. Lysaer's own level of culpability in his actions is always going to be an open question, but this book reminds us that the curse is something real and horrifying.
We also get to see the downside of the Koriani. We get to see how the lives of younger initiates are basically used and spent by those more powerful then them. We get to see the effects of a broken vow, and are reminded, yet again, that these women are recruited and sworn to oath as children. They get power and youth and a long lifespan, if they survive. But it's definitely not without cost.
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So let's talk about the Characters.
Arithon is having a rough time in this book. Even before things go to Hell with the curse. He's dealing with the terrible decisions he'd made in Vastmark and is still getting dicked around by the Fellowship. He's trying his best to curtail Lysaer's actions and, in his well-meaning arrogance, becomes the perfect victim for Koriani schemes. He seems to end the book in a better place than he started, at least, but the poor guy could use a break.
Lysaer has embraced religion all out, and in the process, seems to be losing even more of himself. Mortal justice and divine justice isn't the same thing, after all. Slavery is okay. Dissent from one's subordinates is not. And the Alliance keeps growing in power.
Dakar and Jieret have smaller roles this time around, but they do well with what they've got. It was good to see characters like Felirin and Jinesse again briefly too.
Mearn and Lirenda had larger roles this time around, and both essentially act as plot wildcards, moving things around in unexpected ways. I particularly enjoyed Mearn's dynamic with Talith and Maenol. Lirenda's with Lysaer was pretty interesting too, if also a little frustrating.
And then there's Caolle, who ended up MVP in so many ways. He's had so much growth and development since his first appearance in Mistwraith, and I found myself quite satisfied with where his story ended up.
So yes, the book gets a passing grade. And I am looking forward to the next one. After a long break, of course.
The last book is coming out this May by the way. I am quite excited.
So let's talk about it. We'll start with Plot.
--
The thing to understand about this series is that it's made up of arcs. These arcs are all of different lengths, because Ms. Wurts is sometimes confusing that way.
Curse of the Mistwraith is essentially its own arc, standalone. It's where everything starts. We have Lysaer as an actual person, pre curse. We have Arithon when he was young and only moderately angsty. No one's been crowned and no one's been cursed. It's an innocent time.
Ships of Merior and Warhost of Vastmark is the second arc. They were originally meant to be one book (and are, in hardcover. I still regret not buying it from the used book store. It was big enough to kill a rodent). This is where we have Lysaer the statesman and general pursuing Arithon the pirate and guerilla leader. A lot of back and forth moves and schemes, and character flaws brought home to roost.
By this point in the series, Ms. Wurts knew that this next arc (the Alliance of Light) wasn't going to fit into one book. Apparently, she'd planned two or three. It ended up being five books long. (The series is interestingly palindromic, though. As the following series, Sword of the Canon, is two books. And the last book, Song of the Mysteries, is once more on its own.)
I mention this because, more than anything, Fugitive Prince is really set up. There's movement and direction, but not much by way of climax or resolution. That's going to be a while.
That said, I do think she found a reasonably satisfying point to end things for now. The clans are still in peril and slavery is still a pretty big issue, but they've got some hope for sanctuary and the means of getting there. I particularly liked that the triumph came, not from our heroes, but from the minor characters: Caolle primarily, but also Maenol, Mearn, Eldir and those nameless clan prisoners all were the real reason things turned around.
When it comes to Arithon and Lysaer, well, neither of them had a particularly great time. But Arithon does get something of an emotional resolution with Jieret, and Lysaer, for all his setbacks, comes out of it with a new loyal follower and eventual right hand man. I hadn't thought about it until now, but that's a really interesting parallel. It'll be worth looking at that again, especially if I end up recapping book 6 (Peril's Gate).
Just for perspective, we're on book 4 right now.
I also liked that this book gave us a glimpse at some of the darker aspects of the story that until then had only been discussed. The part of the story where Arithon actually succumbs to the curse is really effective. It really does make us appreciate exactly what he's been trying to fight all these years, while also maybe giving Lysaer a bit of something back too. Lysaer's own level of culpability in his actions is always going to be an open question, but this book reminds us that the curse is something real and horrifying.
We also get to see the downside of the Koriani. We get to see how the lives of younger initiates are basically used and spent by those more powerful then them. We get to see the effects of a broken vow, and are reminded, yet again, that these women are recruited and sworn to oath as children. They get power and youth and a long lifespan, if they survive. But it's definitely not without cost.
--
So let's talk about the Characters.
Arithon is having a rough time in this book. Even before things go to Hell with the curse. He's dealing with the terrible decisions he'd made in Vastmark and is still getting dicked around by the Fellowship. He's trying his best to curtail Lysaer's actions and, in his well-meaning arrogance, becomes the perfect victim for Koriani schemes. He seems to end the book in a better place than he started, at least, but the poor guy could use a break.
Lysaer has embraced religion all out, and in the process, seems to be losing even more of himself. Mortal justice and divine justice isn't the same thing, after all. Slavery is okay. Dissent from one's subordinates is not. And the Alliance keeps growing in power.
Dakar and Jieret have smaller roles this time around, but they do well with what they've got. It was good to see characters like Felirin and Jinesse again briefly too.
Mearn and Lirenda had larger roles this time around, and both essentially act as plot wildcards, moving things around in unexpected ways. I particularly enjoyed Mearn's dynamic with Talith and Maenol. Lirenda's with Lysaer was pretty interesting too, if also a little frustrating.
And then there's Caolle, who ended up MVP in so many ways. He's had so much growth and development since his first appearance in Mistwraith, and I found myself quite satisfied with where his story ended up.
So yes, the book gets a passing grade. And I am looking forward to the next one. After a long break, of course.
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Made it to the last chapter. Janny Wurts reviews always make me feel so accomplished. It helps me not think about the fact that I still haven't posted my Stalking Darkness Table of Contents. (That one's going up tomorrow, I swear!)
But let's see what purple prose awaits us in the home stretch!
( I hope there's a reference to either feline grace or borderline divinity )
But let's see what purple prose awaits us in the home stretch!
( I hope there's a reference to either feline grace or borderline divinity )
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We're actually on the penultimate chapter of this book. That doesn't mean a lot when we consider that each chapter is about three chapters of a normal book. We're thus about six chapters from the end.
It does mean that I'll need to decide what book I'm tackling next. Whether it be Daughter of the Lion (Sixth Cheysuli book!), Legacy (the next Drizzt book) or something else entirely. I'm open to suggestions either here or on discord.
Feel free to weigh in!
Anyway, back to the book. Last chapter, the Fellowship was actually almost useful. Can they maintain that streak?
( Taking all bets! )
It does mean that I'll need to decide what book I'm tackling next. Whether it be Daughter of the Lion (Sixth Cheysuli book!), Legacy (the next Drizzt book) or something else entirely. I'm open to suggestions either here or on discord.
Feel free to weigh in!
Anyway, back to the book. Last chapter, the Fellowship was actually almost useful. Can they maintain that streak?
( Taking all bets! )
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So last time, we saw an old friend. Also the Fellowship might have been almost useful. For a moment. Before being utterly useless again.
( But on the plus side, magic death trap ahead? )
( But on the plus side, magic death trap ahead? )
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So last chapter was Caolle's show. And damn, if he didn't go out like a boss. It'll be interesting to see what ramifications that has now.
( Can't help but notice that the Fellowship remains useless... )
( Can't help but notice that the Fellowship remains useless... )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Ten - Pursuit
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This title bodes well!
So last time, we spent a lot of time with Mearn. He had a rough go of it. The Fellowship remains positively useless. Everyone's walking into various traps. And well, things are not great at the moment.
But we did get to see Elaira tell off Kharadmon. So that was something!
( Hey, at this point, I'll take the positives I can get! )
So last time, we spent a lot of time with Mearn. He had a rough go of it. The Fellowship remains positively useless. Everyone's walking into various traps. And well, things are not great at the moment.
But we did get to see Elaira tell off Kharadmon. So that was something!
( Hey, at this point, I'll take the positives I can get! )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Nine - Setback
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So last time, we saw the Koriani spring their trap. And given that Arithon's team is now short a member, I think it was quite an effective one.
( We also got a really good look at what the curse is actually doing...unfortunately... )
( We also got a really good look at what the curse is actually doing...unfortunately... )
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So last time, we caught up with Princess Talith and resolved that dangling plot thread. I'm sorry, you'll never believe me but that word choice was entirely accidental.
That said, once it came to mind, I had to use it.
So now, we've spent a few chapters building up this whole idea of a trap. Will it live up to the hype?
( No idea, but I bet the prose will be purple? )
That said, once it came to mind, I had to use it.
So now, we've spent a few chapters building up this whole idea of a trap. Will it live up to the hype?
( No idea, but I bet the prose will be purple? )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Seven - Hunters
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Okay, so last time, Arithon got to be a sexy, sexy distraction in a scene he wasn't even present for. Also, Jieret has a named successor now. I hope that's not foreshadowing...
( when your main protagonists live 500 years, eventually people will probably die... )
( when your main protagonists live 500 years, eventually people will probably die... )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Six - Tangle
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So last time, we saw Bardic Angst and Sorcerous Scheming.
We're not going to see the results of the last yet, I think. There's still some set up to go.
( I'm sure it'll be fine! )
We're not going to see the results of the last yet, I think. There's still some set up to go.
( I'm sure it'll be fine! )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Five - Riverton
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So last time, we had Arithon return from a pointless voyage (Thanks Fellowship!), Morriel perform some kind of massive arcane working that kills one of the participants (because being a Koriani sucks), and Lysaer makes a trip.
What happens this time?
( Who knows! But the prose will likely be purple! )
What happens this time?
( Who knows! But the prose will likely be purple! )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Four - Turnabout
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So last time, we learned that the Fellowship is really fucking terrible. So are their adversaries, so I'm stuck, reluctantly supporting those assholes. Ugh.
It's funny to me. I am honestly not sure if Ms. Wurts intends the Fellowship to be as aggravating as they are to me. She's not a subtle writer, by any means, but she is pretty thorough, and as we see at the beginning of this chapter and earlier instances, she generally does seem to anticipate a lot of reader complaints/questions about their motivations.
But they're still presented pretty uncritically, with the only callouts (while valid) coming from characters who are objectively worse. Or at least doing more direct harmful things.
( I suppose we may only know by the end...in May! )
It's funny to me. I am honestly not sure if Ms. Wurts intends the Fellowship to be as aggravating as they are to me. She's not a subtle writer, by any means, but she is pretty thorough, and as we see at the beginning of this chapter and earlier instances, she generally does seem to anticipate a lot of reader complaints/questions about their motivations.
But they're still presented pretty uncritically, with the only callouts (while valid) coming from characters who are objectively worse. Or at least doing more direct harmful things.
( I suppose we may only know by the end...in May! )
Fugitive Prince - Chapter Three - Sentence
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So it's the New Year! It seems appropriate to start it with my favorite guilty pleasure series. Also I was lazy on Sunday, and I have today off, so I actually have time to do this one. Yay!
( They take a while. Brevity is a dirty word on Athera... )
( They take a while. Brevity is a dirty word on Athera... )
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So last time, we caught up with Elaira (who delivered a baby), Lysaer (who has just instituted conscript slavery) and Mearn (who is plotting.)
This time, if the somewhat redundant chapter title is any indication, we're probably going to catch up with our actual lead character. And Dakar! Am I still going to be making "get a room" jokes now that hate-sex is off the table?
( Maybe we'll find out! )
This time, if the somewhat redundant chapter title is any indication, we're probably going to catch up with our actual lead character. And Dakar! Am I still going to be making "get a room" jokes now that hate-sex is off the table?
( Maybe we'll find out! )
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So last time, I gave a refresher of the series so far! This time, we're actually starting. Woo.
Note: NOTHING in this recap will make sense if you haven't read prior recaps. Sorry.
But first, let's gently mock the old cover. Because it's great and I, unironically, miss when Wurts painted her own book covers. (The new covers are so dull!!!)
( I mock out of love )
Note: NOTHING in this recap will make sense if you haven't read prior recaps. Sorry.
But first, let's gently mock the old cover. Because it's great and I, unironically, miss when Wurts painted her own book covers. (The new covers are so dull!!!)
( I mock out of love )
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So, it's apparently been almost two years since I read the last book in this batshit series that I love and love to mock so much. That's a lot, considering that I genuinely do enjoy reviewing this series.
It is a time and energy investment. These books are fucking HUGE and thanks to the level of purple prose and the ridiculous actions of the characters, I'm inclined toward a LOT of excerpts. To be honest, I'm pretty sure only one person has actually read these. I'm okay with that.
Anyway, I have just learned that the most recent and FINAL book in this series has just gone up for preorder. So the time just feels right to go back to this universe. I hope I have the stamina.
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So one interesting quirk about this series is that it is divided into arcs, of sorts. The first book, Curse of the Mistwraith, was standalone. Ships of Merior and Warhost of Vastmark are one arc - actually, they started as one book (and the hardcover is published that way) - but it turned out too big in paperback form. That's why Warhost of Vastmark is so small - a mere five hundred something pages.
The next arc in the series, "The Alliance of Light" did not start as one book. Or perhaps it did, I don't know any backstory. What I do know is that this arc consists of books four through eight of the series. It's fucking LONG. And none of these books are Vastmark length either. They do flow together, at least in my memory, enough that I'm not entirely sure what happens in which book.
I THINK this is the one with the naked cuddling? We'll see.
One thing I do know is that this next part of the series will take place over a substantial period of time. We're dealing with a hero and a villain who drank from the five-hundred year fountain after all, and we're going to start to see that. Child characters are going to grow. Some characters are going to die. And it's going to be rough. But we're at the start of the trip, so I don't think we have to worry too much about that yet.
Yet.
Now, given the length and general complexity of the series so far, and the fact that it's been so long since the last one, I decided rather than start outright. I'm going to write a refresher of the series so far.
The real content will be next week.
( I might do more series recaps, if folks like them... )
It is a time and energy investment. These books are fucking HUGE and thanks to the level of purple prose and the ridiculous actions of the characters, I'm inclined toward a LOT of excerpts. To be honest, I'm pretty sure only one person has actually read these. I'm okay with that.
Anyway, I have just learned that the most recent and FINAL book in this series has just gone up for preorder. So the time just feels right to go back to this universe. I hope I have the stamina.
--
So one interesting quirk about this series is that it is divided into arcs, of sorts. The first book, Curse of the Mistwraith, was standalone. Ships of Merior and Warhost of Vastmark are one arc - actually, they started as one book (and the hardcover is published that way) - but it turned out too big in paperback form. That's why Warhost of Vastmark is so small - a mere five hundred something pages.
The next arc in the series, "The Alliance of Light" did not start as one book. Or perhaps it did, I don't know any backstory. What I do know is that this arc consists of books four through eight of the series. It's fucking LONG. And none of these books are Vastmark length either. They do flow together, at least in my memory, enough that I'm not entirely sure what happens in which book.
I THINK this is the one with the naked cuddling? We'll see.
One thing I do know is that this next part of the series will take place over a substantial period of time. We're dealing with a hero and a villain who drank from the five-hundred year fountain after all, and we're going to start to see that. Child characters are going to grow. Some characters are going to die. And it's going to be rough. But we're at the start of the trip, so I don't think we have to worry too much about that yet.
Yet.
Now, given the length and general complexity of the series so far, and the fact that it's been so long since the last one, I decided rather than start outright. I'm going to write a refresher of the series so far.
The real content will be next week.
( I might do more series recaps, if folks like them... )
Warhost of Vastmark - Verdict
Jan. 13th, 2022 02:02 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Okay, so let's talk about Warhost of Vastmark.
Now I mentioned in my Ships of Merior verdict post that it was difficult to evaluate the book entirely because it was only one half of the story. Originally, Merior and Vastmark were written as one book. The hardcover still IS one book (one terrifyingly large book! There was a used bookstore that had it. I already had both paperbacks at the time so I didn't buy it, but I kind of regret that. It would have made a great bludgeoning weapon.)
So anyway, now that we've read BOTH halves of the book, what do I think?
Plot
So the plot of Vastmark IS the plot of Merior. Just continued. Lysaer's got his warhost. They've encountered a temporary setback in Minderl Bay, but they're still coming. Arithon's building his fleet in Merior, until he encounters his own snag.
There's a lot of move and countermove. Arithon flees Merior. Lysaer invades Merior and wins the majority of the townsfolk to his side. Arithon sets up a new base of operation. Lysaer strengthens his alliances and influence in the south. Arithon kidnaps Talith to buy time. Lysaer has Dhirken killed. And it all culminates in the invasion.
And there are a LOT of parallels. The parallels were present in Merior, but definitely more highlighted here. Arithon's strict, near draconian control of his workers, to the point where a woman or child could be alone on a ship in the middle of nowhere and still be assured of their safety vs. Lysaer's vast idealistic army who may or may not engage in the occasional genocidal impulse. Arithon's reliance on the knowledge of the Vastmark archers and Erlien's clanfolk vs. Lysaer's complete ignorance and disinterest in many local practices and customs (such as the Brotherhood of Ath). That kind of thing.
Hah, I just thought of another parallel: Arithon wins the Vastmark archers over through plans to make their lives better, increase their resources, access to education, and control over their trading prospects. Lysaer ends the book planning to make lives on the continent better.
But that said, this is LYSAER we're talking about. So god knows what form THAT will take.
So anyway, since 99% of the set up was in Merior, we could just hit the ground running in Vastmark, and we do. The pace is fast, for a doorstopper novel. And it's fun!
I do think that if I were reading it as a standalone, I'd have gotten lost very fast. But this is not a series that you read standalone. Sorry, you're in for the long haul. That said. I did think it was a good (temporary) ending. It's nice to see Arithon at peace.
Characters:
So let's start with our lead character. Arithon is the kind of authorial favorite that you're going to either really enjoy or really hate. Fortunately for me, I find him delightful. The nonstop action means that we have less time for quiet or introspective moments, sadly, but it's hard to mind that when he's also busy having a bitch-off with his brother's wife. (She was never going to win that.)
Ultra-compassionate asshole is a character type that is very difficult to execute well, but Wurts makes it work. Arithon can be vicious, even cruel, but it's never for its own sake. And when he does make those decisions that cross the line, for example, the Havens massacre, we are given clear reasons why.
And of course, there's Dakar. I mentioned in my Merior review that Dakar's plotline basically sat on the back burner as soon as Arithon reached Merior. But fortunately, Vastmark picks it right back up again.
Dakar hates Arithon and loves Lysaer. But there's a lot that he doesn't know, and there's a lot that he's willfully blinded himself to. And in this book, he's forced to confront that. It could occasionally get a bit frustrating, like how he persisted in his distrust of Arithon after the incident with Jilieth, when they had a full on empathic bonding. But I think Wurts does a good job with setting up some layers there. Dakar may express that he still hates/distrusts Arithon, but their dynamic does shift after that point. Dakar starts to see a lot that he missed before. And of course, the reconciliation is just lovely.
And I appreciate that Dakar ends up taking steps toward self-improvement without it being a huge thing. He stops drinking to excess. He starts taking his magical practice more seriously. But he doesn't become studious, slim and full of temperance. He's still a fat hedonist, who prefers to avoid physical discomfort (me too, dude), but he steps up when it counts.
My only complaint is that the progression of Dakar and Arithon's relationship took a lot of suspense out from the whole "will he or won't he let Arithon die" question. He'd already clearly chosen Arithon's side like two chapters before. (And since we're talking about Wurts monster chapters, we're talking about six normal sized chapters.) But it was still pretty entertaining.
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Lysaer is really interesting in this book. In Merior, I think the focus was more on his power and charisma. He had moments of vulnerability, and certainly set backs like Minderl Bay, but he was generally shown from a position of strength. He still is, here, but we also get an exploration of his flaws.
These flaws aren't just made up out of the blue, either. They're legitimate traits that we saw all along, even in Mistwraith, but now, they actually matter.
Lysaer is closed-minded. He gets his mind set on the "truth" of the matter, and he is completely unwilling to hear anything that doesn't fit. If Jinesse and her neighbor say that Arithon would never keep a prisoner, they must be misguided. Whereas if he bothered to listen, and ask questions, he might have caught Tharrick instead. He's put Talith aside, causing himself and her tremendous pain, because he can't accept that she has a different perspective.
And he can't accept his faults. In the Brotherhood of Ath, he has a moment where he is almost entirely free of the curse's influence. He hears the truth about his brother, but he can't accept it. Because then he'd have to accept that what happened at Tal Quorin was on him. Lysaer is willing to work hard to strengthen his power of light, but he never considers the ramifications of its use. He never seems to put together, for example, that it was HIS light blasts that destroyed his fleet at Minderl Bay, just like it was his lightning bolt that set off the rock slide at Dier Kenton.
The one open question that's worth revisting is "is Lysaer redeemable?" And the answer is...difficult. It is true to say that Lysaer probably would never have engaged in any of the terrible things he's done if he had never been touched by the Mistwraith's curse. And it isn't clear entirely how much he knows or understands about the curse itself.
But there are also points where he's given the opportunity to fight it. The Brotherhood of Ath show him the truth, when he's as close to his right mind as possible, and he rejects it completely. He recognizes that Talith might actually be able to convince him to drop his crusade, and instead of trying to hear her out, he imprisons her.
In Mistwraith, Lysaer was a victim as well as a villain. And maybe that's still true, but I think it's also fair to say that he is something of an enthusiastic participant at this point.
Verdict:
I mean, look, of course it passes. I wouldn't be able to read and review these giant-ass chapters if I didn't love the book. And in retrospect, Merior passes as well. The plot threads left dangling were resolved nicely. And while I missed Elaira and Jieret, whose plots wrapped up in Merior, I enjoyed the greater roles for Talith and Caolle. It was a lot of fun!
Now I mentioned in my Ships of Merior verdict post that it was difficult to evaluate the book entirely because it was only one half of the story. Originally, Merior and Vastmark were written as one book. The hardcover still IS one book (one terrifyingly large book! There was a used bookstore that had it. I already had both paperbacks at the time so I didn't buy it, but I kind of regret that. It would have made a great bludgeoning weapon.)
So anyway, now that we've read BOTH halves of the book, what do I think?
Plot
So the plot of Vastmark IS the plot of Merior. Just continued. Lysaer's got his warhost. They've encountered a temporary setback in Minderl Bay, but they're still coming. Arithon's building his fleet in Merior, until he encounters his own snag.
There's a lot of move and countermove. Arithon flees Merior. Lysaer invades Merior and wins the majority of the townsfolk to his side. Arithon sets up a new base of operation. Lysaer strengthens his alliances and influence in the south. Arithon kidnaps Talith to buy time. Lysaer has Dhirken killed. And it all culminates in the invasion.
And there are a LOT of parallels. The parallels were present in Merior, but definitely more highlighted here. Arithon's strict, near draconian control of his workers, to the point where a woman or child could be alone on a ship in the middle of nowhere and still be assured of their safety vs. Lysaer's vast idealistic army who may or may not engage in the occasional genocidal impulse. Arithon's reliance on the knowledge of the Vastmark archers and Erlien's clanfolk vs. Lysaer's complete ignorance and disinterest in many local practices and customs (such as the Brotherhood of Ath). That kind of thing.
Hah, I just thought of another parallel: Arithon wins the Vastmark archers over through plans to make their lives better, increase their resources, access to education, and control over their trading prospects. Lysaer ends the book planning to make lives on the continent better.
But that said, this is LYSAER we're talking about. So god knows what form THAT will take.
So anyway, since 99% of the set up was in Merior, we could just hit the ground running in Vastmark, and we do. The pace is fast, for a doorstopper novel. And it's fun!
I do think that if I were reading it as a standalone, I'd have gotten lost very fast. But this is not a series that you read standalone. Sorry, you're in for the long haul. That said. I did think it was a good (temporary) ending. It's nice to see Arithon at peace.
Characters:
So let's start with our lead character. Arithon is the kind of authorial favorite that you're going to either really enjoy or really hate. Fortunately for me, I find him delightful. The nonstop action means that we have less time for quiet or introspective moments, sadly, but it's hard to mind that when he's also busy having a bitch-off with his brother's wife. (She was never going to win that.)
Ultra-compassionate asshole is a character type that is very difficult to execute well, but Wurts makes it work. Arithon can be vicious, even cruel, but it's never for its own sake. And when he does make those decisions that cross the line, for example, the Havens massacre, we are given clear reasons why.
And of course, there's Dakar. I mentioned in my Merior review that Dakar's plotline basically sat on the back burner as soon as Arithon reached Merior. But fortunately, Vastmark picks it right back up again.
Dakar hates Arithon and loves Lysaer. But there's a lot that he doesn't know, and there's a lot that he's willfully blinded himself to. And in this book, he's forced to confront that. It could occasionally get a bit frustrating, like how he persisted in his distrust of Arithon after the incident with Jilieth, when they had a full on empathic bonding. But I think Wurts does a good job with setting up some layers there. Dakar may express that he still hates/distrusts Arithon, but their dynamic does shift after that point. Dakar starts to see a lot that he missed before. And of course, the reconciliation is just lovely.
And I appreciate that Dakar ends up taking steps toward self-improvement without it being a huge thing. He stops drinking to excess. He starts taking his magical practice more seriously. But he doesn't become studious, slim and full of temperance. He's still a fat hedonist, who prefers to avoid physical discomfort (me too, dude), but he steps up when it counts.
My only complaint is that the progression of Dakar and Arithon's relationship took a lot of suspense out from the whole "will he or won't he let Arithon die" question. He'd already clearly chosen Arithon's side like two chapters before. (And since we're talking about Wurts monster chapters, we're talking about six normal sized chapters.) But it was still pretty entertaining.
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Lysaer is really interesting in this book. In Merior, I think the focus was more on his power and charisma. He had moments of vulnerability, and certainly set backs like Minderl Bay, but he was generally shown from a position of strength. He still is, here, but we also get an exploration of his flaws.
These flaws aren't just made up out of the blue, either. They're legitimate traits that we saw all along, even in Mistwraith, but now, they actually matter.
Lysaer is closed-minded. He gets his mind set on the "truth" of the matter, and he is completely unwilling to hear anything that doesn't fit. If Jinesse and her neighbor say that Arithon would never keep a prisoner, they must be misguided. Whereas if he bothered to listen, and ask questions, he might have caught Tharrick instead. He's put Talith aside, causing himself and her tremendous pain, because he can't accept that she has a different perspective.
And he can't accept his faults. In the Brotherhood of Ath, he has a moment where he is almost entirely free of the curse's influence. He hears the truth about his brother, but he can't accept it. Because then he'd have to accept that what happened at Tal Quorin was on him. Lysaer is willing to work hard to strengthen his power of light, but he never considers the ramifications of its use. He never seems to put together, for example, that it was HIS light blasts that destroyed his fleet at Minderl Bay, just like it was his lightning bolt that set off the rock slide at Dier Kenton.
The one open question that's worth revisting is "is Lysaer redeemable?" And the answer is...difficult. It is true to say that Lysaer probably would never have engaged in any of the terrible things he's done if he had never been touched by the Mistwraith's curse. And it isn't clear entirely how much he knows or understands about the curse itself.
But there are also points where he's given the opportunity to fight it. The Brotherhood of Ath show him the truth, when he's as close to his right mind as possible, and he rejects it completely. He recognizes that Talith might actually be able to convince him to drop his crusade, and instead of trying to hear her out, he imprisons her.
In Mistwraith, Lysaer was a victim as well as a villain. And maybe that's still true, but I think it's also fair to say that he is something of an enthusiastic participant at this point.
Verdict:
I mean, look, of course it passes. I wouldn't be able to read and review these giant-ass chapters if I didn't love the book. And in retrospect, Merior passes as well. The plot threads left dangling were resolved nicely. And while I missed Elaira and Jieret, whose plots wrapped up in Merior, I enjoyed the greater roles for Talith and Caolle. It was a lot of fun!
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So wow. I made it. This is the last chapter of the third book in this batshit doorstop series. There's still like eight books to go, but still, I'm kind of proud of myself here.
( So let's get to it! )
( So let's get to it! )