Golden Queen - Chapters 21 and 22

[kalinara]

So we've made it to the big climax. Our heroes have had their great duel with the Dronon. And, well...they lost. This raises the question, now what?

Since we've reached the end of the book, I guess we'll find out!

( Alas poor Veriasse! )

Golden Queen - Verdict

[kalinara]

Okay, so we've made it through the Golden Queen by Dave Wolverton/David Farland.

Honestly, to misquote Gallen O'Day, it's kind of a "mixed bag of goods."

I think there are things that Wolverton does really well here. Overall, I think the world-building is decent. I still don't quite know how long the dronon have been in power. I probably missed the detail, but I feel like that sort of thing should be more obvious from context than I found it to be. A lot of the locations seemed like they'd been undergoing a societal slump for a very long time. But Everynne herself is only three years old, so the dronon rule probably wasn't that long.

I do like the idea that maybe the Tharrin weren't the perfect administrators they seemed like, but that's not really established. That said, there are still two books in the series, so it's possible that some of the timeline quirks and other mysteries would be solved later.

I think Wolverton did a good job in giving us some very distinct settings. I liked the idea of the Maze of Worlds. I liked the individual stops, which all felt very unique and alien. I like what we've seen of dronon society. They make for some scary villains.

It reminds me a little of Courtship of Princess Leia: the most interesting parts of that book, for me, was the introduction of Hapes and Dathomir. I thought both settings had a lot of interesting potential that the story didn't necessarily explore the way it could have.

I almost think Wolverton missed his calling, and he'd have really excelled as an Ed Greenwood style setting builder. I'm not really a fan of Greenwood's novels, per se, but there's a reason the Forgotten Realms is by far the most popular D&D setting.

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As for Plot...

I mean, it's not bad. Since Wolverton is working with his own characters, we don't have to wince at Han and Leia's bizarre behavior. There are reasonably high stakes, and the adventure part generally flows.

I'm not sure why Maggie had to get the brunt of the truly horrific experience on Fale though. I'm actually not sure why that whole sequence was necessary at all. It's not like Maggie shows any sort of significant trauma afterward. It did give us a look at how awful the dronons' long term plans were, but the emotional impact really lacked. Especially compared to Gallen's plot, which felt mostly aimless and casual.

The biggest issue I had, I think, is that Wolverton would occasionally choose the wrong viewpoint characters for an event.

Like, I bitched a lot about Gallen and Maggie's relationship. I especially hated how everyone under the sun acted like she owned him, when the ONLY thing he'd ever expressed at that point was that she was too young for him. Then, he sleeps with Everynne and all of a sudden realizes he loves Maggie?

Okay, fine. I can see how that could happen, but that sort of realization works better when we can see Gallen make it! If we had Gallen wake up next to Everynne and think about how it was nice, but he wished for more of an emotional connection, which he had with Maggie... If we saw him look at Maggie and think about how while she's still young, her experiences have given her wisdom and insight...

I feel like that would have worked better.

And I'm still upset to have missed out on Everynne's conversation with Semarritte or Orick. Hmph.

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For characters:

Eh, another mixed bag really.

Gallen is a decent protagonist. Usually. Except for those weird moments of callous indifference. It was kind of funny that I was reading Golden Queen alongside Jhereg, and the freaking ASSASSIN shows more hesitance and reluctance to torture someone than the more traditional hero. Especially given the tendency that Wolverton has to aggrandize him. Yes, we get it, Gallen is awesome and beautiful.

...seriously though, Gallen's hair is described far more lovingly than Maggie or Everynne ever were. (Isolder also had long blond hair. Maybe Wolverton had hair envy?)

Poor Everynne. She was actually interesting as a character, but she was never allowed to be anything but passive. Even at the end, it's Maggie who brings about their victory. It's Maggie who frees Everynne from the burden of her fate. I mean, I prefer that it was Maggie and not Gallen, but still.

Veriasse...ugh. He started out well, but the blurred lines between Everynne and Semarritte just made things gross. You can't have a heroic character think about Everynne the way he does, when she's calling him father. It just doesn't work.

Maggie is the strongest of the leads, I think. She's forceful, determined, and active. I'm just not particularly fond of her tendency toward domestic abuse.

Orick is the best, of course. Go Orick!

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So, in the end, I guess my verdict is that the story failed. It wasn't terrible. It had good points. But it never really gelled together the way it should. And the characters, though they had potential, weren't enough to carry me through the annoying parts.

I would maybe give some of his other works a shot though.