Nerilka's Story - Chapter Eight

[kalinara]

So last time Nerilka made a few pit stops and found her way to Ruatha. And I didn't say this before, but I really appreciate the pacing of that. It would have been a bit of a waste to send Nerilka straight to Ruatha proper, rather than let her roam a little. But since we know the plot continues in Ruatha, it would have been annoying to stretch that part out too long.

McCaffrey, when she's on, is a very good craftsman. This is a good example of it. But now, let's let the plot continue...

( And let's see what happens next )